社會(huì)主義價(jià)值自從被提出之后,就被大家廣為傳頌和學(xué)習(xí),不僅出現(xiàn)在學(xué)生的課本上,在街頭巷尾城市形象設(shè)計(jì)中都有體現(xiàn),因?yàn)檫@是值得我們?nèi)巳藢W(xué)習(xí)的!如果把社會(huì)主義價(jià)值放在高考英語(yǔ)作文中會(huì)如何考察呢?考生該從哪些角度和方面來(lái)展開(kāi)描述社會(huì)主義價(jià)值觀呢?需要用到哪些詞匯和短語(yǔ)嗎?以下是小編為大家整理的高考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)!
主題一 社會(huì)主義價(jià)值觀
【示例分析】
如何理解“成功”, 不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(yǔ)(quotation), 按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ”
—Sir Winston Churchill
內(nèi)容要求:1. 你對(duì)該引語(yǔ)的理解;2. 你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷;3. 恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。
注意:1. 短文開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息;
3. 詞數(shù):80左右。
練考場(chǎng)審題
Step 1:審題 謀篇布局
人稱(chēng) | I |
時(shí)態(tài) | 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí), 一般過(guò)去時(shí) |
段落布局 | 開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題: 點(diǎn)明對(duì)引語(yǔ)的理解 主題段落:用事例解釋對(duì)這句話的理解 結(jié)尾:再次深化自己的觀點(diǎn) |
Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴 字字珠玉
(1)美詞:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. . . when. . . , succeed in
(2)佳句:
?、?So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.
?、?Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花
要點(diǎn)1:我激動(dòng), 決定試騎一下。
一般表達(dá):I was excited and tried my hand at riding it.
句式升級(jí):(so. . . that. . . 倒裝句)
我是如此激動(dòng)以至于等不及要試騎一把了。
So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.
要點(diǎn)2:回顧過(guò)去, 我覺(jué)得如果我失去了信心, 就不能學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車(chē)。
一般表達(dá):Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldn’t learn to ride a bike.
句式升級(jí)(分詞作狀語(yǔ), 虛擬語(yǔ)氣):
回顧過(guò)去, 我覺(jué)得如果我失去了信心, 就不能學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車(chē)。
Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Step 4:銜接過(guò)渡 斐然成篇
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Instead, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.
Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it.
【仿寫(xiě)實(shí)踐】
假定你是李華, 現(xiàn)在某英文報(bào)社面向中學(xué)生征文, 題為“50年后的地球”, 請(qǐng)發(fā)揮你的想象力, 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文, 向該報(bào)社投稿。
注意:詞數(shù)80左右。
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【參考范文】
What will our earth be like after 50 years? I have some wonderful predictions.
The environment then will be much better than it is now. People can enjoy the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air. There will be less pollution. Trees and flowers can be seen here and there. The rivers will be cleaner as no factories pour waste into the rivers and lakes. As for people’s life, there will be great changes. First, people will lead a more comfortable life because robots will reach each family and help people do the housework. In addition, people can work at their own homes on the Internet. In this way, they will have more time to entertain themselves. The earth will become a more comfortable planet for people to live on 50 years later.
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